Kosuzu Motoori (![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
readingcomprehension) wrote2016-06-29 09:20 pm
readingcomprehension) wrote2016-06-29 09:20 pm
HMD
For a change of pace, let's leave comments on this one unscreened. If you want to do things screened, I don't mind getting Kosuzu crit over at Napstablook's! Or vice versa! Or I can screen/unscreen things on request! I don't even have a preference I just thought screening these was standard.
I will say I'm a bit uneasy starting out, here, because I honestly do think that the whole jamjar situation should freak Kosuzu out a bit more than things usually do in canon. (Because things do also freak her out in canon sometimes; it depends on the circumstances, and these are extreme circumstances.) I'm not terribly confident about striking a balance on that. It should even out in time, both as she settles in and I get more used to playing her, but in the meantime if you've got feedback I'd be happy to hear it.
I will say I'm a bit uneasy starting out, here, because I honestly do think that the whole jamjar situation should freak Kosuzu out a bit more than things usually do in canon. (Because things do also freak her out in canon sometimes; it depends on the circumstances, and these are extreme circumstances.) I'm not terribly confident about striking a balance on that. It should even out in time, both as she settles in and I get more used to playing her, but in the meantime if you've got feedback I'd be happy to hear it.